Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

Some individuals say that
bicycle
is a good and modern transport
option
. Whereas,
other
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others
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say that riding a
bicycle
is
non beneficial
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non-beneficial
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.
However
, in my opinion, there are
lot
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a lot
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of advantages to riding a cycle and
that is
discussed in the
further
paragraphs.
To begin
with, according to me,
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
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is a good and valuable
option
to
travel
. One of the main
benefit
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benefits
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to
travel
on
bicycle
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a bicycle
the bicycle
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is,
keep
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to keep
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physically fit and healthy.
For example
, moving on a
bicycle
is
expand
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expanding
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and
stretch
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stretching
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our leg
muscle
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muscles
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while
pedaling
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pedalling
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.
In other words
, recent research was claimed that, when a person
travel
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travels
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5 kilometres on a
bicycle
, it can burn almost 500 calories. So, it is a good and healthy
option
to
travel
on
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by
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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.
In addition
, if
distance
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the distance
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is not far,
then
it is a good and convenient choice to
travel
on
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by
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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instead
of walking.
Therefore
, it should be better for our health and keeping mentally active as well.
On the other hand
, many
individual
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individuals
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claim
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claims
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that it is
worst
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the worst
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option
in terms of transportation. It can increase the chances of collision
in
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on
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busy
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a busy
the busy
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road
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roads
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.
For instance
,
country
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a country
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like India does not have
separate
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a separate
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lane for
bicycle
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bicycles
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, and many
of
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apply
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rider
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riders
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should face
the
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apply
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accident while crossing
the
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apply
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over crowded
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overcrowded
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road.
Moreover
, it should physically tired while
cover
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covering
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the long distance in
bicycle
, and might be chances of heart attack for overriding in long routes.
Hence
, could have been
decrease
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decreasing
decreased
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the chances of
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an accident
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accident
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accidents
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when government should think about
bicycle
rider
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riders
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to develop
separate
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a separate
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path
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paths
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for them. In conclusion, riding a
bicycle
is a better
option
if
distance
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the distance
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is less. In my opinion, every person should ride
cycle
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a cycle
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for keeping healthy and fit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-friendly
  • pollution
  • cost-effective
  • initial investment
  • maintenance costs
  • healthy lifestyle
  • form of exercise
  • congested urban areas
  • traffic jams
  • bypass gridlocks
  • limited protection
  • vulnerable to injuries
  • long-distance travel
  • transporting heavy loads
  • weather conditions
  • cycling infrastructure
  • uncomfortable
  • unsafe
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