An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Country development depends upon how well professionals are growing and it is undeniable, that more and more health workers and educators are migrating to other countries and leaving their undeveloped provincial behind.
This
essay will discuss the two main causes and solutions in detail with examples based on that.
To begin
, moving abroad for work is popular among experienced workers because of unsatisfactory jobs such
as low wages. To explain further
, qualified people like doctors and teachers don't get paid that much in their native place because of the poor economy. For example
, Doctors who get their degree in 5 years and spent
another 1 year in training will receive a poor amount of money as their salary and no incentive will have low satisfaction as compared to foreign individuals who get handsome money for their skills. Wrong verb form
spend
Moreover
, fewer career opportunities in poorer parts of the world is
another reason for migration. So Correct subject-verb agreement
are
to conclude
, lack of money and decrease in career growth makes some people travel to different places.
Despite
, many reasons are there to leave undeveloped nations and migrate.These problems can be resolved by increasing salary. Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
In addition
, introducing good governmental schemes for skilled jobs like teaching and medicine which
will result in financial growth. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, 60% of the nurses move to other countries because of their high salary packages and incentives along with
good pension schemes. To sum up
, drifting
of polished employees could be reduced by Correct article usage
the drifting
making
enhancing annual income and giving Verb problem
apply
bonus
all over the year.
In conclusion, growth and learning Fix the agreement mistake
bonuses
is
a part of human development and some folks get settled abroad for bread and butter especially, medical people and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
educations
trainers leaving their own place because of low income and lack of future options which can be solved by increment and acknowledgement at the workplace. Change the noun form
education
This
will surely help in future development.Submitted by jayasingh352 on
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