In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future, because there are many online
news
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platforms
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and downloadable
books
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available online today, it will make
people
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shift to these facilities rather than buy printed
newspapers
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or paper
books
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. Joining
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debate, in
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essay I will elaborate that paper
books
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will still be on-demand, yet printed
newspapers
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may be replaced by online
news
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.
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of all, there are many online
platforms
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that offer free e-
books
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from any kind of
topic
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as history, science, fiction and many others. It allows us to read all these
books
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online and it
also
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provides [a portable document format (PDF) version] that we could download.
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, many
people
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especially students could save their money on new
books
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.
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,
although
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we could read or even download hundreds of files of e-
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, we cannot deny that most of the online
platforms
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only provide old
books
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. Based upon my experience, some
books
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from famous writers and newly published
books
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are not available to be read or downloaded for free.
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, we have to go to big bookstores to purchase the hardcopy.
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why I disagree that there will be no more
people
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who want to buy printed
books
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.
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,
newspapers
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are now published online as well as in print, so
people
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today can get the latest
news
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and information from online
news
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websites or their social media.
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, I agree that printed
newspapers
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will be less interesting because reading
news
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thought through/via a mobile phone, a tablet or a computer is more practical and flexible for most
people
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.
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, due to the environmental issue, reducing or even shifting from printed
newspapers
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will support the policy/program to decrease the number of tree logging as a raw material of papers.
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, in the future, nobody will buy printed
newspapers
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. To summarise, because online
news
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platforms
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are much faster and more practical to release the latest update
news
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rather than printed
newspapers
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, there will be no more
people
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who will buy them in future.
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, because not all
books
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are available online and most of them are old and not more relevant with the current issue, printed
books
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will always have their consumers.
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