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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #media #privacy #price #fame #invasion #life
Being famous is
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pleasing
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 thing,
however
, it has been noticed that sometimes popular persons are being treated unfairly,
specially
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, in their private
matter
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. In my opinion, while they deserve
the
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privacy
, somewhere they have to pay the price for being famous. Though
,
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 observing
privacy
 is a constitutional right for everyone, in
case
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the case
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 of celebrities, it has been not followed religiously. Because print media publishes everything about their personal life, it hardly remains private.
Furthermore
, media houses tweak the truths for their own benefits which may convey the wrong image of the role model to the public.
For example
, publications had printed
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 personal information about Mr Amitabh Bacchan's family disputes; due to which their friend following
loose
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the
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faith in them.
Hence
, they should be given some
privacy
 in their personal affairs. On the flip side, fame comes with
price
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 to pay. While they enjoy the perks of popularity, they have to pay the price with their
privacy
. Public figures always prefer to remain in
limelight
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 and centre of attraction in the eyes of their audience due to which they are being followed by
camaras
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cameras
 which leads them to capture each and everything;
hence
, nothing remains private, regardless of their wish. To exemplify, when any film star visits any party, the page three party reporter captures their photos of their grand entry along with whole coverage of
behind-the-scenes
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the behind-the-scenes
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story
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 and dirty secrets. In my opinion, most popular persons are contributing hard in their fields to achieve their position. While media is necessary to cover their success and make them reach to public, they must
also
 respect their
privacy
. Once should play
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 role on what to display and what not to.
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