Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

Currently, several tasks are being performed by machines and not
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humans. Working with
robots
can have more profits and less cost than working with people, and
this
is a huge change for
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society, with positives and
negatives
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consequences for
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human life.
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essay will review these ideas. There is no doubt that we are at the beginning of a great change in how we see
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human life, and numerous reasons can be mentioned,
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as consumer needs, or economic,
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, social and technological reasons.
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,
although
the initial cost of buying machines may be higher, in
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long time the savings can be considerable. It is a known fact that machines can be more productive than
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, not only for the precision or speed,
also
because the
robots
do not have any absenteeism by accidents or diseases. At home, the
robots
help us in daily duties,
such
as
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,
clean
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or security. Another important aspect to mention
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is that
robots
do not have teams or personal conflicts and require
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minimum
maintaining
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. The consequences of
this
trend could be positive
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negative. On one side, if work is done by
robots
, the industries could increase their profits and reduce economic and productivity losses, being able to produce large quantities of products.
Also
, people can have more free time to enjoy
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the family, do a hobby or study.
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,
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society could have several social problems
such
as
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in unemployment,
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in crimes, drugs and mental illness.
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, in my city exist a huge number of homeless and drug
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, because of unemployment. To conclude,
robots
are more and more
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in
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human life, not only for
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technology development in industries
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also
because
robots
are a good tool for daily living.
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, it is strongly necessary
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us as a society for these changes, to prevent social and mental troubles and problems in the future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Artificial intelligence (AI)
  • Humanoid
  • Machine learning
  • Task allocation
  • Operational costs
  • Manual labor
  • Disruptive technology
  • Ergonomics
  • Unemployment
  • Cybersecurity
  • Technological singularity
  • Redundant workforce
  • Innovation
  • Ethical considerations
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