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Today more countries import food different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.-Topic

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Introduction
International businesses come to a point where most of the
communities
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 ,consume
foods
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 that are produced in a foreign nation.
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 new development, has some negative points like chemical usage and high cost , there are some positive points like more business opportunities and
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 able to expose to newer kinds of
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.In the following essay ,
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Body paragraph 1
To begin
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 modern business high level of cost is the main drawback . Even though the
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 in the developed nations could be affordable at
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 cost ,
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 in the developing countries are usually unable to pay . At the same time , some of these
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 like fruits and vegetables may contain multiple chemicals used to preserve their freshness.
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 , a study conducted by an Indian university has found , most of the vegetables which are exported from India contain more than 5 types of chemicals , to keep them fresh and to prevent riping them .
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
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 , when we talk about the advantages , uplifting of the business opportunities for local
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 will come
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 of
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 , they will have a good profit and their standards of living will be high . Apart from
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 around the globe will get a chance to taste different types of
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 and they will experience the cultures of other nations .
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 , most of the Sri Lankan cousins like seafood were exporting to other countries and
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 ,especially in western countries like to purchase these products .
Conclusion
In conclusion , with the development of transport more and more
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 like to buy
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 that are of foreign origin . Since there are some positive and negative effects on
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 development ,
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