Your city council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you do not want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council. In your letter, say what the importance of this historic building is mention why it should be renovated rather than pull down suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to suggest you that, do not demolish the Taj Mahal building located in the Sivaji Area of our city
which is famous not only in our city
but also
in our nation.
Because this
building is a historical monument built by King Shah Jaha in memory of his wife Mumtaj, It is very important in the history of the love and identity of the nation. If we renovate that structure instead
of pull down, It can add to the beauty of the city
and it will even increase the visitors from all around the nation and the world to visit this
place which can increase the business nearby and help in the growth of the city
. As the government do not have enough funds to renovate it, you can raise funds through the city
website where people can contribute money according to
their ability and that money will help you to maintain that building.
Best of luck.
Your Faithfully,
AnkitSubmitted by ap064911 on
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task achievement
The letter addresses the main points requested by the task but could benefit from more specific details and a clearer structure.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph covers a single idea and that these ideas are connected logically. For example, breaking down the importance, the renovation reasons, and funding plans into separate paragraphs would improve readability.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate for addressing a city council, and the intention behind preserving the historic building is clear.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite, creating a positive impression.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.