In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it good thing or a bad thing?

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Nowadays, all new constructions look alike.
On the other hand
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,
people
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think that these
buildings
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should reflect our culture and tradition. In my opinion, the raising of
buildings
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must be in a similar structure to reduce the stress for Architectures.
Firstly
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, our country is an overpopulated place with different
people
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living in many metropolitan cities like Hyderabad, Mumbai and Delhi. Many
people
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migrate from village to city for job, education and better lifestyle. For these
people
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, the government constructed many
buildings
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in a similar pattern to reduce the
cost
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of design.
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, recently Telangana government completed the
construction
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of Pink and Yellow
buildings
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for backward
people
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.
This
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construction
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is built in the same proportion to reduce the
cost
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of
construction
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.
Moreover
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,
construction
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of the same
buildings
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can reduce the
cost
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of
materials
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used to design and
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material can be used in the
construction
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of medical care centres.
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,constructing a house in a new pattern can
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up to 50-60 lakhs and
materials
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like Cement, Soil, Paint and Bricks can
cost
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up to 50 thousand. These
materials
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are very limited insource.By, constructing similar
buildings
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, we can reduce the use of limited
materials
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and use them for social works and hospital
construction
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.
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, the
buildings
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in the past often reflected our culture and tradition. The
buildings
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in the past are Historic Monuments now like Charminar and Taj Mahal. Nowadays, Engineers find it difficult to construct
this
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type of
buildings
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to maintain our culture. All in all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. According to me, the raising of
buildings
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must be in a similar size and shape to reduce the stress for the masses and
also
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stress for the government.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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