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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

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In recent years, a lot of academies provide
sports
 courses for students who want to improve children's well-being. In fact, institutions did not serve the
sports
 material just to tackle the overweight problem on children, but for certain goals,
for instance
, competition, passion, and reputation of the study place.
This
 essay will argue that schools should not increase the pastime and exercise activity for enlistment to tackle the problem, but they can provide some courses related to physical and mental health. As a matter of fact, it is true that doing some exercises can normalize weight. Many studies stated that holding play thrice a week routinely can decrease heaviness by approximately 3 kilograms, and over than that can less around 5 kilograms. But even so, school is the place for studying and learning some materials like mathematics, physics, language, etc, not for exercising (except training-schools based on
sports
).
In addition
, the institute provides
sports
 programs just for the schools' vision which is to make them reputable. To deal with the problem, teachers can train their admission to maintain their healthiness through class training on the course of the sport. Even more, the chemistry teachers can teach their students how to control kinds of foods, that can normalize and increase health and overweight. More importantly, they can direct admission to go to the gym or do some self-exercise at home or field.
Nevertheless
, enlistment can learn a lot about it through certain training provided by gym trainers, and
also
 doctors who specialize in weight control. As a final point, decreasing the weight of enlistment is not the responsibility of teachers in school, but the self-awareness of the student. As was previously stated, the university just provides a course on how to control physical and mental health,
also
 motivate them to go to the gym's trainers if needed.

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