Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

There is a debate about whether individuals should stop eating

both

of

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the

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white and red meats, and that issue has evolved and divided

people

into two different groups.

This

essay examines

both

sides of

this

argument and why I believe it is always good to have a balanced diet. There is a group that proclaims that being a vegan could benefit

people

and

earth

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. There are two reasons why some individuals are shifting to be more green.

Firstly

, sometimes

people

have spiritual reasons why they do not want to kill an animal. At

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level, these

people

tend to believe that by killing animals, humans

are contribute

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in

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increasing the overall

of

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suffering.

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, by

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eating fish, caw, and

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bird

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a

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individual can reduce that level of suffering.

Secondly

, being a vegan could strengthen the immune system.

Also

, it could cleanse our

body

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by extracting all the

toxics

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toxins

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.

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, it

is became

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so famous that

people

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calary

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celery

salary

juice on empty

stomch

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stomach

stomachs

, and

this

is because it can be used as a detox.

On the other hand

, there is a consensus among

people

that there is

not

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corralation

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correlation

between

both

of the subjects like being vegan and that it might benefit the world as

whole

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. Humans are eating all

kind

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of meats for more than 2,000 years, and nothing had happened.

Furthermore

, if

people

want to benefit the earth, it is better to go clean the beach to

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the consequences of climate change.

Moreover

, a human being needs a wide range of

protains

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proteins

and

vitmines

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vitamins

vitamines

, and by excluding them from someone’s diet,

people

are putting themselves

in

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a huge risk.

For example

, there are some

protains

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proteins

it only

exsits

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exists

in animals. In conclusion, I believe that

both

sides have merits. On balance,

however

, it is my

opinon

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opinion

that having

a balance meals

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could make

people

more

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healthier.