Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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There is a debate about whether individuals should stop eating

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white and red meats, and that issue has evolved and divided

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into two different groups.

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essay examines

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sides of

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argument and why I believe it is always good to have a balanced diet. There is a group that proclaims that being a vegan could benefit

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and

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. There are two reasons why some individuals are shifting to be more green.

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, sometimes

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have spiritual reasons why they do not want to kill an animal. At

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level, these

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tend to believe that by killing animals, humans

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increasing the overall

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suffering.

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eating fish, caw, and

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individual can reduce that level of suffering.

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, being a vegan could strengthen the immune system.

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, it could cleanse our

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by extracting all the

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so famous that

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celery

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juice on empty

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stomach

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is because it can be used as a detox.

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, there is a consensus among

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that there is

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corralation

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between

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of the subjects like being vegan and that it might benefit the world as

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. Humans are eating all

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of meats for more than 2,000 years, and nothing had happened.

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want to benefit the earth, it is better to go clean the beach to

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the consequences of climate change.

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, a human being needs a wide range of

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proteins

and

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vitamins

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, and by excluding them from someone’s diet,

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are putting themselves

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a huge risk.

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, there are some

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proteins

it only

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exists

in animals. In conclusion, I believe that

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sides have merits. On balance,

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, it is my

opinon

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opinion

that having

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could make

people

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apply

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healthier.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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311 words

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Plant-based diet
Chronic diseases
Greenhouse gas emissions
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