3. many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, a lot of individuals are spending,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

more

time

for

Change preposition

on

show examples

their professional careers, the

lesser

Correct word choice

less

show examples

time

for

Change preposition

on

show examples

sports or social services. Which will result in several health and mental

illness

Fix the agreement mistake

illnesses

show examples

.

This

essay will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages.

Firstly

, the overtime

time

will benefit for financial stabiles within a short span period at the workplace.

This

will not only impact

financial

Replace the word

finances

show examples

but

also

able

Correct word choice

enable you

show examples

to get promotions as soon as possible. Most

Change preposition

of

show examples

the employees are dedicating their valuable period for their organization to complete the given task within the allocated schedule. Which will

claim

Verb problem

help

show examples

to develop their company in a competitive industry.

Conversely

, the employer will look into long-term performance rather than how long will work per day. If workers have not been able to perform well

due to

health issues, management will terminate them or de-promote them from their current positions because of excessive young

talents

Fix the agreement mistake

talent

show examples

.

This

is called smart work is the key to success

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

the modern world rather than hard work.

Moreover

, the staff will be affected mentally because they may

isolate

Wrong verb form

be isolated

show examples

from their family, friends and daily life cycle. Once they have

been

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

felt loneliness,

thereafter

it will impact them psychologically.

On the other hand

, physical exercise is more important to keep everyone healthy and fresh

although

blood circulation,

sweating

Correct word choice

and sweating

show examples

are dynamic factors

to run

Change preposition

in running

show examples

our

day to day

Add a hyphen

day-to-day

show examples

movements

otherwise

we will not get self-motivate from our inner

mind

Fix the agreement mistake

minds

show examples

. In my personal life, I have been actively working weekly

five

Change preposition

for five

show examples

days and

also

monthly once going to a new place with my neighbours which

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

is

show examples

impacting me to love myself. Taking into consideration, each person should spend sufficient

time

for non-job-related activities

such

as

volunttinee

Correct your spelling

volunteering

for social services, physical exercise, spending sufficient

time

with family and friends

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

etc.