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Modern lifestyles means that many parents have little time for their children.Many children suffer because they do not have her as much from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or did agree?

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In the current busy world majority of the
parents
 are left with
little
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 moment to spend with their offspring. A lot of children nowadays suffer as they get little attention as compared to the past. I agree with the said statement as a lot of youngsters start taking drugs as they have no one to guide them.
In addition
 ,
this
 loneliness leads to more tv watching which impact their moods a lot.
Firstly
, in
this
 fast-moving ,world everyone is working hard to earn more money for a better future. In
this
 thirst to acquire more and more people tend to spend the majority of their occasion sitting at the office desk and attending meetings which affect their young offspring. In the large metro ,
cities
kids
 spend most of their time with caretakers are servents. As a ,result many of the young offspring become drug addicts.
For instance
, as per a survey done by an international magazine more than 70 per cent of the
kids
 with working
parents
 have low attendance in comparison to students whose mothers are housewives.
Additionally
,
kids
 who have both working
parents
 spend nearly 7-8 hours watching Television which has a negative impact on their eyes, thoughts and mind. They tend to be very violent and arrogant as they don't have anyone to guide and supervise. These children become criminals when they grow older and not only that they have very little respect for their
parents
 as well.
For example
, in big ,
cities
 most children want to stay alone and spend time with their friends
instead
 of spending time with their family.
Additionally
, it is
also
 noticed that there are more fights over the property in big
cities
 in comparison to the villages and small
cities
.
Hence
, we can conclude that, if both the
parents
 of any child is working
then
 there is a greater possibility that they are prone to drugs and have a bad moral character in comparison to
kids
 who don't have both working
parents
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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