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Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Numerous folks believe that pedagogical and higher training should be free to let any potential juvenile join any major of their interests. That needs government support to provide the universities' expenditure, as far as I am convinced it may be a true story. If the higher information became free, majority of youngsters may be encouraged to have a higher degree in their favourable field, as a vivid example everyone has dreamed about their future when they are a child but by limitation of schooling not only did not they approach their goal but they
also
 may become disappointed.So scholarship must be free and accessible to everyone , even for the poor to reach their goals by hard-working and knowledge that was achieved academically. Another essential factor has to do with social class,Neither the deep pockets nor the poverties detest tuition fees. If colleges are available for the wealthy generation it may create a gulf between riches and poverty people and lead to many issues
such
 as obsession and hate for lavish individuals and
this
 will unbalance the nation as I said. To sum up, learning at any level should be achievable to anyone and societies and governments should add an informative budget to their country to build a successful generation.
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