some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.

There is a debate about a

zoo

in contemporary society. Opinions are divided over whether or not a

zoo

is necessary. Some people argue that it is wrong to put

animals

into

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a

zoo

.

However

, others assert that it is needed for enjoyment and maintaining the ecosystem.

This

essay will outline both sides and show my view. On the one hand, some people assert that keeping

animals

in a

zoo

is cruel as it is a jail for

animals

. They could be stressed and frustrated in a

zoo

.

For example

, when I visited a

zoo

in Japan, I found that the majority of

animals

were wandering in a cage due to stress. There was no shade under the sun.

Therefore

, they suffered from the strong sunlight with dehydration. As the example clearly illustrates, it is unjust to rock them to jail, with a detrimental environment.

On the other hand

, not only can a

zoo

provides entertainment to individuals, but it may

also

bring about a safe space for

animals

, leading to maintaining biodiversity. Due to development in nature, a significant number of

animals

have lost their habitats.

therefore

, they are in danger of extinction.

For instance

, a survey conducted by Korea Animal Protecting Foundation has revealed that only one couple of Korean tigers

left

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in a

zoo

as the rest of them are disappeared in the world. It is clear that the

zoo

succeeded to maintain the gene of Korean tigers. In conclusion, while I accept that a

zoo

is essential for enjoyment and biodiversity, I would point out that people need to enhance the environment in a

zoo

in order not to make

animals

stressed.