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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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It is generally acknowledged that a significant number of offenders are re-involved in crimes in contemporary society.
This
 essay will outline potential reasons why
criminals
 commit
offenses
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 repeatedly
,
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 and suggest possible solutions which should be taken into consideration. There are two main reasons why
criminals
 re-involved crimes.
First
 of all,
although
 lawbreakers get punished in prisons, they have not been rehabilitated because they always get along with other
criminals
. They might learn the new law-breaking
skills
 from the group of other
criminals
 in
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jail.
Secondly
, after they are released from prisons, they suffer from poverty since they do not have social
skills
 and practical
skills
.
For example
, a survey conducted by the Korea Crime Research Foundation has revealed that almost 30% of
criminals
 have broken laws due to famine and poverty. As the example clearly illustrates, the poor environment of
criminals
 can be a key factor to involving crime multiple. ​
However
, it is not all doom and gloom as there are specific methods to handle these problems. Not only can working for public services causes rehabilitation among offenders, but it may
also
 bring about acquiring various
skills
such
 as cleaning
skills
 and construction
skills
.
For instance
, as the Korean government has provided vocational courses with a practice that contributes to society, the re-offend rate has significantly decreased than before.
Furthermore
, the society improved without using state funds ​ In conclusion, due to gathering with other
criminals
 and a lack of practical
skills
, the majority of
criminals
 re-offend, but learning vocational
skills
 can be an efficient means of not being involved in crime again. At the same time, public services can be developed by
lawbreakers
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 efforts.
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