More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Many

students

go overseas to study at colleges or universities in

this

day and age. People have different opinions on whether or not studying abroad is beneficial. While some assert that studying in other countries has drawbacks, I strongly believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages. On the one hand, some argue that people who study overseas can be a burden on their

parents

as it costs a great deal of money. Since

parents

have to pay for children’s living

such

as accommodation fees, school tuition fees and transportation fares, they have to work hard.

For example

, in Korea, not only can an excessive amount of work for

parents

who support their children

causes

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a lack of rest, but it may

also

bring about health problems

such

as stress, leading to

burn-out

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syndrome.

Therefore

, they lose their own lives and health, but they just dedicate their time and energy to supporting their children.

On the other hand

, once

students

graduate high education from other countries, it can be a key factor in having the chances of better job opportunities. It is generally acknowledged that owing to globalization, the majority of companies want people who know other cultures and languages well.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Korea occupation Foundation has revealed that almost 30% of companies prefer to recruit employees who have studied abroad.

Therefore

, studying abroad contribute to having well-paid jobs among

students

. In conclusion, while I accept that studying overseas sometimes be rather stressful for

parents

, I would point out that it might provide a better future for children.

However

, I recommend that

students

should do

part time

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jobs to reduce

parents

’ burden.