Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, economic growth becomes the most vital goal that the government can be thought. Whereas, others have their opinion that the
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have to think of other kinds of
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because it is
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necessary. From my perspective, all aspects of
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in the
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should be thought about because each kind of
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is important too.
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of all, we must see other aspects that can make income for the
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, namely, agriculture, education, tourism, and other sectors. Even though, these sectors do not play as big as what the economy did.
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, we have to see their contribution to the overall
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's
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, Indonesia's creative industry has made job opportunities for more than 10,000 people during
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pandemic while the economic
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in Indonesia had a dramatic dropped.
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is why other types of growth which can make an income is
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necessary.
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, the economic area plays the biggest role in the
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's income because the economic
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contains business, trade, export and import. Many developed
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are experts in their economy and without ,hesitation we can see that their economic increase is always on top rather than developing
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will lead to the rise of the overall Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the
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. Taking Middle East
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as an example, they sell crude oil to many
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in the world and as the result, they have become one of the richest
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in the world until now. To conclude, I believe that every
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in the
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takes part in the
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's growth.
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it is not as many as an economic
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has done, still other sectors can be really helpful ,especially during
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hard time of the pandemic.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • socio-economic development
  • quality of life
  • stakeholder
  • sustainable development
  • public sector
  • non-governmental organization (NGO)
  • civic engagement
  • green technology
  • quality of education
  • universal healthcare
  • cultural integrity
  • global competitiveness
  • human capital
  • innovation ecosystem
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