Internet should be used for children. Do you agree?

There are people who believe
children
should be allowed to be able to use the
internet
.
Although
the
internet
is useful in many ways,
children
are very vulnerable and their access to the
internet
is better to be restricted. The worldwide web is a phenomenon of the 21st century that has some advantages for
children
.
First
of all, the
internet
is playing a major role in the world today and
children
ought to be instructed how to use the
internet
like all other lessons they are taught at school,
otherwise
, what they learn would be useless as everything including everyday chores are related to
this
technology now and in future.
Besides
,
children
are very curious and eager to learn new facts about the world around them and teachers and parents are not always able to answer all of the questions they ask,so it would be a great chance for them to find out everything they would like to know through the mysterious world of
internet
and burgeon their talents.
On the other hand
, despite the fact that the
internet
has some advantages for adolescents, it is immature to let them use the
internet
without the supervision of their guardians.To
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,
children
could be easily a victim of cybercrime or even become potential criminals on the dark web.
For example
, a thirteen-year-old boy has hacked the CIA ( Central Intelligence Agency) and more than hundreds of gigabytes of data has been compromised which affected millions of Americans' safety since
then
.
Furthermore
, Mafia and paedophiles are always there to take advantage of a child using the
internet
which its effects are irreversible and could affect whole his life. In conclusion, the
internet
has some advantages for
children
in order to grow their talents and knowledge through it.
However
, their access to
this
technology should be restricted as they are vulnerable to criminal activities taking place there.
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