Your friend wants to send her/his child to learn music. He/she asked you for some information about the music academy that you went to. Write him/her a letter. You should: - Describe the music school - Suggest a teacher or a class to go to - Explain why you recommend it.

Dear Tom, I'm just writing to let you know about the music school that I used to attend. It's called Premier Music Academy and it's in the centre of District 1.
Although
it's a small school with only a few classrooms, it has an excellent reputation among parents and past pupils.
Moreover
, lots of their past students have gone on to become famous musicians. I suggest your daughter joining in Mrs Smith's piano class. She's my old teacher and I absolutely loved her.
In addition
, learning the piano actually helps young people to develop their other skills,
such
as their intellect. I
also
noticed a piano in your living room, so Sarah could practice at home. I highly recommend the school for its enjoyable environment. As I said before, I attended Mrs Smith's classes when I was a child and I couldn't be happier.
Furthermore
, I know many other parents who send their kids there and they have always said how safe it is and how friendly the teachers are. All the best, Hanks.
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