In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

The transportation system is growing so fast that it is about to be driven completely automatically. Bearing
this
fact in mind, a controversial question that might arise is whether it is beneficial to take place or not. In my perspective, there would be far more advantages than its disadvantages if it happen. My own view is supported with the following multitudinous reasons in the following.
To begin
with, according to the importance of speed in our life
this
high-level-tech technology is going to boost it. In another word, the machines all have to be set at a specific time so that the of their arrival and their moving time is determined.
Consequently
, all employers, employees and workers will be on time and punctuate.
Additionally
, as the
drivers
are just a program human mistakes during driving will have lessened mankind's risks significantly. Because the systems can not be drunk or sleep on the way. Which has always been one of the notable and dangerous driving issues.
On the other hand
, there might be the risk of the systems error which would bring about real tragedies. According to recently the news report of two High-speed train crashes
however
they were semi-automatic.
Besides
,
this
matter will lead to many people being unemployed. There is a majority of
drivers
no matter, taxi
drivers
, pilots or bus
drivers
, all are going to lose their jobs so that they won't be able to afford their life. In conclusion, the disadvantages of driverless transportation are much greater than its benefits, as it would be the reason for major disasters.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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