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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the 21st century,the rate of corruption is rising very rapidly.Individuals do not even frighten while they do any crime.There are so many types of lawlessness.
For instance
 robbery in houses or any shops,snatching purses from streets and in markets,rapes which are very common nowadays,the religious indifferences,the terrorist attacks and so on. The publishing is a source to report to the public about the crimes that happen in the country or all over the world. News plays an active role in aware peoples of the wrongdoing which happen in their surrounding.Some communities think that the
media
 should not report all the details of any violation to the public.The statement is somehow right that the
media
 should keep the details confidential of any serious lawlessness. Through ,
media
 people get aware of the crimes and
also
 they learn tricks and tactics to tackle the situation.If the
media
 discloses all the information on social news to it could be harmful to both the public and the evidence.Some arrogant society may destroy the proofs and maybe security cannot control them ,especially in religious indifference matters.So in my opinion
media
 should hide the reports which cause a big threat to the life of innocent public and
also
 for the country.
Submitted by AROOSA ASYM on

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