news stories on TV and newspapers are very often accomplaint by pictures. some people say that this picture are more effective than words what is your opinion about this?

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can depict the whole story in
people
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’s minds and it is more easily guide
people
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to understand and remember a circumstance
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of reading thousands of words.
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, I insist with numerous
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’s views that it is more effective to attach pictures along with stories rather than just articles. On the one hand, a
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can express lots of information at
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sight. According to the research,
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can imagine and supplement
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information from a
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which is means that readers can get as much information from a
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at
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sight rather than read a whole article and to get understand the occurrence. The
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attached
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to the news could attract the reader’s attention and it is quite more efficient than sentences.
On the other hand
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, a
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can prove authenticity. There is no doubt that more and more press would use exaggerated sentences to depict the stories in order to capture the attention of readers. If there is a
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which was recorded the true situation that happened,
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the whole news would be more reliable.
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, In 2020, there was a rebellion in HONGKONG, there is a Western press report that one of the police
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threatens the civilians with a gun.
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, a photo posted on the TIKTOK shows there are some
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throwing a chemical tool toward to police officer.
Picture
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not only can prove the truth but
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limited the fake new publishing . To conclude, the
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along with an article could help
people
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get a better understanding of the occurrence,
also
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can prove the authenticity of the news which is more efficient than sentences.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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