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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Currently, there is much discussion with regard to
people
's
health
. It is argued that
people
's
health
 is predicted to be decline than
this
 present day. In my humble opinion, I totally disagree with
this
 and think that from now onwards
people
 will receive appropriate knowledge about nutrition or behaviour, plus there is a considerable increase of facilities for a workout.
Firstly
, there are updating information about how to eat healthy on every platform whether online or offline on a daily basis, which means
people
 are educated from the proven newest data by plenty of intelligent scientists from around the world.
Consequently
, they will know how to behave for good
health
. A good case in
this
 point is parents who just have a baby will give everything they know how to raise a child for a better life so the
first
 thing they take care of is nutrition. That's why the
next
 generation will grow with having good
health
.
Secondly
, we have more choices types of workouts and more comfortable places for activities.
For instance
, there is fitness in flats or condominiums where there is a lot of residents in there, and there is a public park which has a free mini open-air gym,
thus
 everybody can use that for exercising even in the morning before going to work or after finishing work.
Accordingly
,
people
 tend to have more exercise which is the majority factor for being healthy. In conclusion, educating updating healthy knowledge and more facilities for workouts give tons of benefits to
people
 ,especially the
next
 generation.
Hence
,
people
 from now on is likely to have good
health
 than the present.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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