In many modern societies,grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?
The young generation is mainly observed in cities away from their elder parents because of different reasons.It results in weak bonding between them and a lack of understanding of many human values.Spending short time with them from childhood leads to recognising the importance of families.
This
essay will discuss the outcome of Linking Words
hardly
time spent with the children might lead Change the word
hard
into
unnecessary directions in future. In my opinion,Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the recently
recently
higher education system and lifestyle attracted so many pupils in remote areas to turn Change the word
recent
up
their lives towards the big areas.Change preposition
apply
However
,it creates a distance between Linking Words
grandparents
and little ones.Use synonyms
In addition
,inadequate facilities,Linking Words
unemployment
in Correct word choice
and unemployment
the
rural Correct article usage
apply
place
Fix the agreement mistake
places
makes
isolate them from their loved ones.Of course,it affects indirectly Verb problem
apply
on
their upcoming lives.Change preposition
apply
For instance
,working parents cannot give Linking Words
a
enough time to teenagers and cannot teach behaviour sense,Remove the article
apply
Correct word choice
or respecting
respecting
seniors. Replace the word
respect
This
may drive into weird characters.Linking Words
For example
,junior people are committing crimes and illegal activities day by day.In comparison,adults who were raised with the support of Linking Words
grandparents
are polite,humble and helpful to others which Use synonyms
are
often seen. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
On the other hand
,the busiest life in highly developed communities converted to survive in nuclear type of structured families Linking Words
due to
the Linking Words
western
culture thought process.To illustrate,young babies started to stay Capitalize word
Western
separately
and they were never taught the significance of Change the word
separate
grandparents
and guardians.Obviously,to nurture a baby from birth every type of good virtue is responsible Use synonyms
to get
success.Scenarios Verb problem
for
such
as drug and excess alcohol consumption spoiled so many precious lives.Linking Words
This
is happening because of poor mentoring and Linking Words
focuses
on them.Negative outcomes result in depression,aloneness,Wrong verb form
focus
anxiety
at Correct word choice
and anxiety
saviour
extent Replace the word
the same
due to
the absence of experienced citizens at home. These issues must be figured out at the earliest stage Linking Words
otherwise
,it would generate imbalance and conflicts within the families. In conclusion,for some period immature Linking Words
person
should stay and gain the human values and ethics to improve the personalities Fix the agreement mistake
people
with
Change preposition
of
the
parents and Change the word
their
grandparents
.They should not Use synonyms
mark
as an option to adapt the qualities Wrong verb form
be marked
while
growing.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion