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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In
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 present-day world,it has to be believed that some people have
talents
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 by born
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 as sports, music et cerata whereas others do not have.Whatever the belief is some rational beings claim that anybody can learn any
skills
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 under training; If parents have no talent but their offspring have so it is very difficult to understand who has talent and has not, by training only we can measure a person. At
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 juncture, I am going to explain both themes in detail with appropriate instances. To commence with, it is indeed an irrefutable fact that the
talents
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 not only have through parents but
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 individual taste.
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, a seminal study was conducted by scholars of pediatry doctors in Kerala about the importance of the training the
children
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 need for developing their
talents
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 if it is hidden.The result shows about 65% of
children
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 have learned
skills
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 but not by birth;through training,
children
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 learn
skills
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 even though, they did not have them by born gift. To continue, it is an undeniable fact that a great many
children
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 have
talents
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 from their parents.To cite an example, a seminal survey was conducted by Harvard University about the inherent gift in
children
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 and
skills
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 that learned by training category, which one is more talented.The result shows about 70% of
skills
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 more in by born talented
children
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 than others. In conclusion, it is proven that the offspring with
talents
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 by born are more skilled than those who are gained
skills
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 by training. whatever it is scion can learn
skills
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 if they don't have the ability in childhood.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate abilities
  • genetic make-up
  • inherent aptitude
  • nurturing environment
  • rigorous training
  • proficient
  • initial advantage
  • consistent practice
  • perseverance
  • quality training
  • prodigies
  • dedication
  • long-term success
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