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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime

#crime #rate #advance #technology
Nowadays,
crime
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 level is decreasing due to new
technologies
 that allow preventing and solving
crimes
. I totally agree with
this
 point.
Firstly
, there are a lot of systems
which
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that
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 help
police
 to prevent and solve
crimes
.
For example
,
video
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a video
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 surveillance system or
dna
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DNA
 test. With the help of these systems, the
police
 can solve
crimes
 much faster.
In
addition
, it is now more difficult for criminals to remain anonymous, because they could be seen by cameras or left their traces.
Secondly
,
people
 who want to commit
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crime
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crimes
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 will think about
technologies
 that will make it easier to catch them.
In
addition
, a lot of
people
 watch TV, sometimes wanted
people
 are shown on TV.
In
addition
, a large number of criminals were arrested through television programs because they were recognized by
people
 they knew.
In
addition
, a huge number of TV shows about
police
 work discourage
people
 from committing
crimes
, because
people
 understand that the
crimes
 committed by them will be solved by the
police
. All in all, new
technologies
 help
police
 to prevent and solve
crimes
.
Moreover
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 new
technologies
 contribute to lowering
crime
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 rate. In my opinion, it works very well. The latest systems
such
 as face recognition or video surveillance contribute to the disclosure of a large number of
crimes
.
In
addition
, many try to avoid committing
crimes
 because they understand that they will be found. I fully agree that new
technologies
 help prevent
crime
.
In
addition
, I support the development of technology in the field of
police
.
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