Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Every day mass production provides us with a variety of unhealthy edible choices, which cause several health issues that cost so much money and effort to be healed. I strongly agree with the notion, that edible outcomes containing added
sugar
should be charged for extra money, for two main reasons that will be discussed in Use synonyms
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essay.
One reason why these outputs should be more expensive is that they are tremendously bad for physical states. Linking Words
Sugar
is addictive as Use synonyms
science
indicates, Add an article
the science
this
is why sweet products are irresistible. So, the more you enjoy eating sweets the greater consumer you become. Linking Words
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situation can be seen these days when everyone asks for larger sizes of drinks and ice cream. Linking Words
Therefore
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addiction will lead to serious fitness problems like obesity which is highly prevalent on a global scale, which is significantly related to diabetes and both of which are dangerous chronic diseases and very costly to heal. Linking Words
Therefore
, a solid solution is urgently needed, and nothing is more powerful than taxation.
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Furthermore
, another reason to charge extra is people have to be strongly discouraged. Most social psychologists agree that using financial methods can develop positive behaviour, especially at the beginning, Linking Words
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people will pass Linking Words
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For example
, here in Saudi Arabia, the taxes on drinks containing added Linking Words
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have been applied for three years now and the early results are promising. The Use synonyms
sugar
taxes can effectively reduce consumption; because the higher the product costs the fewer customers will buy. Use synonyms
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will make buyers rethink their shopping choices Linking Words
especially
when thinking about purchasing unnecessary goods like highly sweeten ones. Add the comma(s)
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Although
some individuals might find that a sort of limitation on freedom, it is sincerely to their benefit.
In conclusion, with all the knowledge of the dangers of sugary items on well-being, I believe that an effective solution like taxation should be applied in order to prevent chronic diseases and help people to maintain a healthier lifestyle.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite