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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

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In today's society, the idea
that is
 to owning a house rather than renting a home is one of the significant things for many populations leads to various benefits and
this
 is a positive action. From my point of view, I strongly agree with
this
 viewpoint, described in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached. It is undeniable that nowadays the number of construction accommodations is increasing because of the alteration of people's thinking.
However
,
this
 case leads the motivate economy in various countries to better than in the past. As, when a large number of citizens admit
this
 idea, the citizens will desire to be owners of some houses or apartments bringing the population hard-working and trying their best to find the money. That do economic situations in several countries in the good ways.
Moreover
, numerous jobs, which are related about the building
such
 as the architect and house-selling man, their incomes are an increasing, that make their family is happy.
On the other hand
, every coin has two sides. Building the accommodations are not only bringing many advantages but
also
 leads
some
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 disadvantages.
For example
, if the growth of build-up accommodation has, the negative side will come including global warming. Global warming is a vital environmental issue, that population both adults and teenagers are concerned, and is affected by the construction because of the process of that establishment. To conclude, the aspect, which owing an accommodation is the crucial opinion for numerous people is a positive situation since it seems to me that the benefits of
this
 topic outweigh the disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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