These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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people
tend to live in Use synonyms
the
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a
place
where it is not their hometown. Many Use synonyms
people
migrate to new places, like Use synonyms
city
even Use synonyms
another country
, and leave the Fix the agreement mistake
other countries
place
where they come from. It may Use synonyms
as a result
of financial and occupation demand or even they just want to live in new Linking Words
circumtance
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
circumstances
circumstance
this
type of development can bring negative and positive Linking Words
impact
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impacts
in
society. Change preposition
on
However
, for me, it will more advantages than disadvantages. Linking Words
Therefore
, in Linking Words
this
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perspective
, especially the weaknesses of Change to a plural noun
perspectives
this
development.
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To begin
with, the benefit of migration is Linking Words
fulfillment
in financial support and better carrier, as the value in our society the better job and the more money we have, the more wealth we are. Change the spelling
fulfilment
People
often Use synonyms
move
to Use synonyms
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city
to get Add an article
the city
better
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a better
job
and gain more money. It is not only distance movement but Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
also
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social
movement. Through Add an article
a social
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move
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the move
better
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a better
place
, they can Use synonyms
also
change their life fortune. Linking Words
For instance
, my parents are Linking Words
migrant
. They Fix the agreement mistake
migrants
move
from one village to the capital Use synonyms
city
of the province where I am living now. At the Use synonyms
first
, they went to Linking Words
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city
for getting Add an article
the city
better
education. Yet, Add an article
a better
finnaly
, they got better carrier in the Correct your spelling
finally
city
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Thus
, they decided to Linking Words
move
away from their hometown.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
disadvantages
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disadvantage
is
types of job in their origin Change the verb form
are
place
will disappear. Use synonyms
For example
, as I mentioned before about my parents, the fact that a lot of my Linking Words
parents
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parent's
parents'
friend
from the same Fix the agreement mistake
friends
vilage
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village
also
moved from that village. Linking Words
As a result
, the village looks so Linking Words
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quiet
quite
, and there is only a Correct your spelling
quiet
handfull
of Correct your spelling
handful
people
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,
is not Remove the comma
apply
use
again owing to the fact that lack of Wrong verb form
used
farmer
there.
To conclude, Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
moved
to other places and leave the origin Change the form of the verb
moving
place
, can be Use synonyms
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an advantage
advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
. Yet, from my perspective, Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
this
development will be more destructive than constructive if there is no Linking Words
desicive
regulation to control the movement of Correct your spelling
decisive
people
.Use synonyms
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