These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

people

tend to live in

the

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place

where it is not their hometown. Many

people

migrate to new places, like

city

even

another country

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, and leave the

place

where they come from. It may

as a result

of financial and occupation demand or even they just want to live in new

circumtance

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circumstances

circumstance

. In my opinion,

this

type of development can bring negative and positive

impact

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in

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society.

However

, for me, it will more advantages than disadvantages.

Therefore

, in

this

essay

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I will describe my opinion from both

perspective

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, especially the weaknesses of

this

development.

To begin

with, the benefit of migration is

fulfillment

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in financial support and better carrier, as the value in our society the better job and the more money we have, the more wealth we are.

People

often

move

to

city

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the city

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to get

better

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a better

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job

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jobs

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and gain more money. It is not only distance movement but

also

social

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movement. Through

move

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the move

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to

better

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a better

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place

, they can

also

change their life fortune.

For instance

, my parents are

migrant

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migrants

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. They

move

from one village to the capital

city

of the province where I am living now. At the

first

, they went to

city

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the city

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for getting

better

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education. Yet,

finnaly

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finally

, they got better carrier in the

city

.

Thus

, they decided to

move

away from their hometown.

On the other hand

, the

disadvantages

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is

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types of job in their origin

place

will disappear.

For example

, as I mentioned before about my parents, the fact that a lot of my

parents

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friend

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from the same

vilage

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village

also

moved from that village.

As a result

, the village looks so

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quiet

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quite

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, and there is only a

handfull

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handful

of

people

are living there. Yet, the most tragic is that most of the fertile soil there

,

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is not

use

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again owing to the fact that lack of

farmer

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farmers

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there. To conclude,

moved

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to other places and leave the origin

place

, can be

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an advantage

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advantage

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advantages

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and

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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. Yet, from my perspective,

this

development will be more destructive than constructive if there is no

desicive

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decisive

regulation to control the movement of

people

.