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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of a high school programme ( for example working for charity, Improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The world has become a safer place due to the volunteers. There is a debate between people as the free volunteering activities should be a mandatory of high school programs as a charity, improving the neighbourhood or coaching the youngsters for sports. I totally agree with
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To begin
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society is
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 the hands of kids and education centres are the places which are crafted children towards that aim. By imposing to engage social services, Pupils are gradually becoming generous. For
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, ‘
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 student who was appeared against global warming has begun a remarkable influence on the community’s wellbeing.
As a result
 of
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, many organizations reduced their mal-activities which are related to global warming.
On the other hand
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 pupils are being under stress due to the heavy workload at school at colleges. In order to happen
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 situation, they become more unhealthy by affecting severe diseases. To illustrate, less eyesight, strain and even diabetes
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the kids. To overcome the strain that children faced nowadays these kinds of charitable works are essential. Since the daily routine is subjected to change and the community works give the mental health to them simultaneously. To conclude,
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charitable works to be a compulsory thing in the college syllabus whereas pupils encourage to engage in social wellbeing as well as to improve their mental and physical health. As I truly agree with the statement and it is proved in
this
 entire essay.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • altruism
  • social responsibility
  • cultivate
  • mandatory
  • detract
  • academic pursuits
  • forced labor
  • ineffective efforts
  • voluntary participation
  • autonomy
  • impactful engagement
  • bridge social divides
  • fostering understanding
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