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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, many
people
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 who live in their
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 or condominium are interested in searching for
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information
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 in the past of their
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 or condominium. In the following paragraphs, the reasons and sources of
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 which what happened in the past for learning about the
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, they can research from the library since there are many books to find out the
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 that they want to know about the
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, If they don't want to go to the library, they will search the internet for
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 about the
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 of their houses or buildings.
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, they can interview neighbourhood who live
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surrounding their
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 of their
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 or building have many reasons for finding out the
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 because they to know what happened in the past, learn about the
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 of their accommodation and
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 of houses or building.
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different ways
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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