Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Presently, with ,globalisation we see wide varieties opportunities for individuals to move across the country and world, but we still see a lot of people complete their lives spending close to their birthplace . In the below paragraph we will discuss the reasons, benefits and losses of said practice and
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my balanced opinion on the discussion. Mainly, reasons for people not moving out of their native area include fear of failure and family attachment. For moving out of local geography people are not sure of their success in life which leads them to the fear of failure phobia. ,
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they have their parents back home whom they cannot leave alone and
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stay back to take care of them. On the one hand, advantages include, they are close to family and have strong knowledge of the locality,
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, being close to family, leads to giving confidence and providing a helping hand when needed. It helps the family to get the support of individuals when needed,
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, since they are born and brought up in the same location, they are experts in their location which leads to giving them a competitive edge over others.
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, my classmate, who stays in our village doing farming is happier than my classmates working in the city, because he stays close to family and has the expertise in location. Overall being in one place leads them to achieve faster success than moving places.
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, disadvantages include, losing out the opportunity of exploring new places and living life in a new way, mainly,Landing in new localities would have thought them new skills. And take their earth to new standards,
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, they end up missing an additional perspective of seeing nature, which would have likely enhanced their wellbeing, giving them a new experience.
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, my schoolmate who stays in the village and has good success compared to others has hardly seen places in the state which others have seen. Obviously, these opportunities do not come every day and need to be taken whenever they arrive. To conclude, I opine, being in birthplace life long is a good thing, but does not allow you to grow and explore the society. So everyone should look at moving out of their birthplace as and when opportunity persists, but should not forget their roots, by providing support in some or other forms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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