The following diagrams shows how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house.

The following diagrams shows how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house.
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The diagrams below show information on a
pellet
stove and a
pellet
boiler utilized to generate heat for a house.
Overall
the
pellet
stove process uses
wood
pellets
to generate hot air
to
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the house by burning them. Meanwhile, the
pellet
boiler
differentiated
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by having a hot stream from excrement as fuel to boil the cold water into hot streams. It can be seen that a
wood
pellets
stove process starts with putting
wood
pellets
into the fuel hopper and is fed to the combustion chamber.
Subsequently
,
wood
excrements are burned, their ashes dropped to the ash pan beneath,
while
the hot air from the flame moves through combustion, and the exhaust duct extruded dirty air from the above rear panel. At the same time, the
wood
pill boiler has cold water to heat
in
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the furnace that has
wood
pellets
as firewood.
Then
, the ash receptacle beside keeps the ash from there, after that, smog moves through the smokestack out
the
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house. After the cold water is boiled into hot streams,
finally
, it is sent to the living room and bedrooms.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pellet, wood, pellets with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
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