In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Television has become the mainstream media in most countries, which allows the authorities to broadcast some criminal
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to
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trend has several benefits, the drawbacks should not be ignored. The obvious benefit of live court
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is that can help to deter crime.
People
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who watched them are likely to gain the awareness of
law
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. What it means
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they are able to know how harsh the punishment is, and if they would commit a crime, they might rethink
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the result.
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, the scenes of criminal
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enable
people
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to acquire
information
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about self-protecting.
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,
people
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can obtain the explanation of laws, procedures of
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, ways of keeping
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through these specific
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, which helps them to protect themselves when they encounter
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a similar
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situation
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, there are
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some drawbacks
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these court
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Firstly
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, criminal
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videos may not suitable for some
people
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, especially
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teenagers.
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, the details of criminal
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mostly contain
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violent, bloody or porn
information
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, images or footage, if they had easy access to these
information
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, images or footage, they might copy what they watched on TV.
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, it is likely to cause negative effects on victims. What it means
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if they were exposed to the public, their privacy might under threat, which may cause
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second
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harm for them.
Moreover
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, the criminal
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on TV cannot be considered as an effective way to reform
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the criminal
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criminal
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criminals
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. When they are known by
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, they probably lose the chance to readapt to
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normal life after they finish their sentence or punishment.
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, the discrimination
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criminals may lead to a potential threat to
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society. In conclusion, while the criminal
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on TV can help to prevent crime and offer
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and knowledge
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general
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public, I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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