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In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Television has become the mainstream media in most countries, which allows the authorities to broadcast some criminal
trails
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public
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the public
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.
Although
this
 trend has several benefits, the drawbacks should not be ignored. The obvious benefit of live court
trails
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 is that can help to deter crime.
People
 who watched them are likely to gain the awareness of
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. What it means
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 they are able to know how harsh the punishment is, and if they would commit a crime, they might rethink
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the result.
Besides
, the scenes of criminal
trails
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 enable
people
 to acquire
information
 about self-protecting.
For example
,
people
 can obtain the explanation of laws, procedures of
trails
, ways of keeping
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 through these specific
trails
, which helps them to protect themselves when they encounter
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situation
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However
, there are
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 some drawbacks
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 these court
trails
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trials
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.
Firstly
, criminal
trail
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 videos may not suitable for some
people
, especially
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teenagers.
For example
, the details of criminal
trails
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 mostly contain
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violent, bloody or porn
information
, images or footage, if they had easy access to these
information
, images or footage, they might copy what they watched on TV.
In addition
, it is likely to cause negative effects on victims. What it means
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 if they were exposed to the public, their privacy might under threat, which may cause
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second
 harm for them.
Moreover
, the criminal
trails
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 on TV cannot be considered as an effective way to reform
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the criminal
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criminal
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criminals
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. When they are known by
public
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the public
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, they probably lose the chance to readapt to
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normal life after they finish their sentence or punishment.
As a result
, the discrimination
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 criminals may lead to a potential threat to
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society. In conclusion, while the criminal
trails
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 on TV can help to prevent crime and offer
information
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general
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 public, I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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