In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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expectancy of life is higher than ever before. Society is aware

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health

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issue and

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to do a healthy lifestyle.

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, numerous elderly

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in some countries.

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essay will discuss the possible problems of

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to tackle the inevitable effects.

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with, senior citizens are an important aspect

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the nation. They can give

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to the government due to their past experiences.

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, given many old generations,

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will suffer from productivity on national labour.

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can not do a difficult job that

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a sophisticated machinery

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because they are lacking

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energy and technological knowledge. For some who are former civil servants, they still get paid with

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salary. It burdens government expenses since they still have to pay monthly

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. Another example is

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private

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, they do not have monthly

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and usually rely on their children for

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. It is not really

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habit since their children

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have their own

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.

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, there are several ways that

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should do to solve

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problem.

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, the government should conduct some skill

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before the senior citizens retired

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as sewing, trading as well as baking. With these

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, the elderly can make money and pay

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living themselves.

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, trading skill is a beneficial thing in current years, if the elderly

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fundamental knowledge on stock,

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, obligation, and others related to investment, they will get massive advantages from

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. Children

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no

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need to supply the monthly living allowance for retired parents. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that every problem has

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own solutions. I believe by making specific training to

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people,

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will reduce the impact of ageing populations.