It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, these animal extinct rates are increasing among certain special animal species. Despite the majority of
animals
dying by natural processes, some argue that these issues are caused by humans. However
, I do not entirely agree that this
situation is happened because of natural selection.
More and more people believe that these serious problems are mostly caused by hunters. Some forest areas in Thailand have found that the number of wildlife have been decreasing significantly during the past 10 years until now. Some accessories are made by the part of animals
such
as ivory from elephants and antler from deer. Moreover
, some believe that some parts of endangered species can cure diseases and totally help them escape from death. For these reasons, in my opinion, the government should be more focused and increase awareness of wildlife conservation.
In the past, Dinosaurs, dodos and other species were extinct from natural disasters such
as huge meteorites from outer space hitting the earth. For these reasons, some assumed that it’s a common thing when animals
might become extinct because of unpredictable disasters. Eventually, the strongest will survive. For example
, if mammoths have adapted to climate change, mammoths would have walked freely across the city now. In fact, it could also
be argued that those animals
which have lived in the ice age should be alive if they have adaptability skills.
To sum up, animals
should have the right to live, human beings should not kill them for their own pleasure. I feel that both natural processes and human beings are the main cause of extinction.Submitted by krittima.tu on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite