Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Violence

is a major

problem

in

schools

nowadays and it has increased in recent years. These days, there are many violent videos posted on the internet and it is very terrible. The main reasons for bullying are the

school

's environment, social

media

effect and negligence by

parents

. In

this

essay

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I will explain the reasons in more detail and ways to overcome the

problem

.

Firstly

, many

parents

have blamed the violent

media

for causing

school

violence

. Television programs and Hollywood movies with shooting and killing scenes have appeared so many times. These violent scenes look so attractive and they are rewarded by the public

instead

of punished.

This

explains why children who view those are becoming violent.

Moreover

, violent video games

also

help with

school

violence

as

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the same way movies do.

Students

may have problems understanding what is real and what is fake.

Next

,

schools

play an important role in the cause of

school

violence

. A

school

is a place where children are taught the right things in life and

students

have always had to face study pressures and arguments with other

students

.

Moreover

, being bullied and teased by others can often lead to violent revenge or retribution.

This

makes

students

feel insulted and it is easy to act without thinking. As we can see

on

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the newspaper or social

media

,

this

factor showed up frequently in

school

violence

nowadays. Lack of monitoring by

parents

is another reason for

violence

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behaviour. To overcome

this

problem

, teachers and

parents

should support them and teach

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right things to do.

In addition

,

schools

should organise outdoor activities for

students

so that they can communicate with each other and make friends. In conclusion,

School

should be a safe environment for learning and developing, but

unfortunately

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it is not as safe as it used to be. The causes of

violence

in

schools

are including

media

,

school

and family.

However

,

violence

can be prevented by the

teachers

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and

parent’s

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support and

schools

also

can play an important role to overcome

this

problem

.