Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. Agree or disagree ?

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are part of our life. Since we were born, we learn about our
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basis is Indonesian.
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learning
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. A handful of
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in that
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, I was learning
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in my high school but I have never been German. Certainly, learning Germany in my high school improve my
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of belief needs to erase quickly because it might
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a different perspective to learn
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, learning
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from anywhere. You can learn
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easily from American series, movies, songs and so on. I believe that through those activities, we can
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our soft skills in
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, in schools, we
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. From that point, it can be
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that learning someone's
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as
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can afford in anywhere, and it can be more effective for someone who preparing
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, there are specifications for individuals if want to
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abroad, grammar, fluency, vocabulary etcetera. These specifications can improve by learning non-stop.
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in
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, you can join EF or TBI, an institution that provided
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if you want to learn
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Goethe Institute. From the explanations above, it can be possible evidence to
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a principle that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that
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. Because as I mentioned before,
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fluency in speaking another
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language
can upgrade by practicing constantly
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many media. To sum up, regarding
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against that statement. Since
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their way to
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, living abroad doesn't guarantee you to become fluent in that
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. It would be better to learn
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, it could be an investment for our future.

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