Some people think that keeping pets is good for children, while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

From ancient times,

animals

live in

people

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accommodation

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accommodations

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.

Thus

, many

people

suppose that

pets

are

great

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a great

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companion

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companions

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for their children, while others are

concern

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concerned

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that keeping

animals

at home could be risky. In my point of view,

although

to

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having

pets

could be traumatic, I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that

pets

have lots of benefits for kids.

First

of all, the

people

who had

pets

in their childhood are usually more responsible,

comunicative

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communicative

communication

and have

less

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fears of

wild

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world than others.

Pets

are

significant

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important for youth in their growing up.

In other words

, kids always

communacate

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communicate

with

animals

as

equal

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, sometimes as

a

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apply

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friends

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, they could spend

lot

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a lot

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of time outside with them, play with them or walk around and meet new friends with other

pets

.

Secondly

, if a kid

have

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a dog or a cat he

learn

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learns

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to be respectful to them

,

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because

animals

do not allow

to

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them to

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beating them or sometimes could hurt

him

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his

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return

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in return

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.

Finally

, living with

animals

since

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from

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young age

lead

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to less stress and

frears

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fears

in the future. Because the adults with

aknowledge

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knowledge

a knowledge

of

animals

behavior

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behaviour

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trully

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truly

understand the reasons of

pets

agression

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aggression

and what should do for avoiding that kind of situations. On the other

hands

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, I

deffinatelly

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definitely

understand

people

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concerns that having domestic

animals

could be dangerous for kids. There is a fact that some of the

pets

such

as

cat

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cats

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, dogs or rats

capable

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of offensive.

However

, that animal's

behavior

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behaviour

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always

have

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has

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the natural reasons they try to protect themselves.

Thus

, there is a responsibility of parents to learn their children to be careful and respectful. Another disadvantage could be

a

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psycological

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psychological

trauma

connect

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with

death

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of

pets

. Some adults remember their

pet's

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pets '

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lost

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loss

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so clearly

so

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that

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they do not allow

to

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them to

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have the same experience for their children. There is a tough decision for everyone and there could not be a right answer. To sum up, while the

pets

could lead to trauma and dangerous situations I personally believe that all these situations might be happened because of ignorance and misunderstanding of

animal's

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world.