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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 digital ,age many people are arguing that
libraries
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 are obsolete , while others disagree and believe that public
libraries
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 will always have an important place in any day and age. In
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 essay I will be discussing both opinions and why I strongly agree with the
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 notion .
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 with, with the expansion of digital media and the internet many individuals opine that there is no need for public
libraries
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 as anyone can find a reliable source of
information
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 anytime anyplace with the click of a finger.It only requires a smart device and internet connection to find the most updated
information
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 about various topics. Technology had made it much easier to acquire
information
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 without having the hardship to go to a library and searching through hundreds of pages.
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, we can not demolish the importance of public
libraries
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 ,Hisotrcailly public
libraries
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 used to be the treasure house of knowledge and
information
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, but with the advancement of technology people could
information
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 online but many problems have
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 recent study that was conducted in The UK suggested that almost 35% of
information
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 that acquired from the online source are fake. Here comes the major role of public
libraries
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 which is a 100% reliable source of
information
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.
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, most of the
information
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 online is in the English language but in ,
libraries
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 we can find it in different languages.
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, public
libraries
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 are considered the perfect place for book lovers to meet and interact with each other. In conclusion,
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 public
libraries
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' popularity has decreased through the years still we can not ignore the important role the
libraries
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 play in any community and society.
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