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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #libraries
In
this
 digital ,age many people are arguing that
libraries
 are obsolete , while others disagree and believe that public
libraries
 will always have an important place in any day and age. In
this
 essay I will be discussing both opinions and why I strongly agree with the
second
 notion .
To begin
 with, with the expansion of digital media and the internet many individuals opine that there is no need for public
libraries
 as anyone can find a reliable source of
information
 anytime anyplace with the click of a finger.It only requires a smart device and internet connection to find the most updated
information
 about various topics. Technology had made it much easier to acquire
information
 without having the hardship to go to a library and searching through hundreds of pages.
However
, we can not demolish the importance of public
libraries
 ,Hisotrcailly public
libraries
 used to be the treasure house of knowledge and
information
, but with the advancement of technology people could
information
 online but many problems have
raised
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 recent study that was conducted in The UK suggested that almost 35% of
information
 that acquired from the online source are fake. Here comes the major role of public
libraries
 which is a 100% reliable source of
information
.
Moreover
, most of the
information
 online is in the English language but in ,
libraries
 we can find it in different languages.
Furthermore
, public
libraries
 are considered the perfect place for book lovers to meet and interact with each other. In conclusion,
Although
 public
libraries
' popularity has decreased through the years still we can not ignore the important role the
libraries
 play in any community and society.
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