Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
The illiteracy
is Correct article usage
Illiteracy
person
who cannot Add an article
a person
the person
to
write and read, and it is Change the verb form
apply
less-discussed
form of education. Add an article
a less-discussed
However
, this
is leading terrible
developing problems where it has. Change preposition
to terrible
According to
UNESCO’s study
, there are still 773 million illiterate adults around the world. There seem to be two main causes, three
effects, which we will discuss here. Possibly Correct word choice
and three
main
cause is the lack of Correct article usage
the main
well trained
teachers, especially the rural areas. Highly skilled workers tend to work city Add a hyphen
well-trained
instead
of the countryside. Because they look for better opportunity
with great pay, and rapid career growth. Another well-known cause is an economic constraint. Being in Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
this
condition most of the children are not able to study
properly. Instead
of Wrong verb form
studying
study
they are sent to earn money. Add a comma
study,
To begin
, poor- quality
teaching disrupts learning and has a negative impact on students. There is Correct your spelling
poor-quality
possibility
that some children are starting their education without finishing it. In other Add an article
the possibility
a possibility
words
they often become unwilling to Add a comma
words,
study
and
de-motivation, and Correct word choice
apply
no
concentration. Add a missing verb
have no
Thus
, students just simply quit. A further
widely-observed impact is having uneducated undermines to get top- level
workCorrect your spelling
top-level
position
. In these cases, people Fix the agreement mistake
positions
expierence
poorer health outcomes, less Correct your spelling
experience
finencial
security, and lower life expectations. Correct your spelling
financial
Finally
, the effects of illiteracy on a country may bring about to
its financial and political situation down. Illiteracy Change preposition
apply
lessen
human resources which is very necessary for Change the verb form
lessens
the
economic development and Correct article usage
apply
political
. Replace the word
politics
Overall
, the poor education system and financial problems seem to be main
causes, and they affect both individuals and society.Correct article usage
the main
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