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the number of waste disposal in one European country between 2005 and 2008.

The given bar chart illustrates the number of
waste
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 disposal in one European country between 2005 and 2008. Overall, it is clear that the figure for
waste
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 burned increased steadily and more people use to
waste
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 landfilled in 2005 than they did later on. According to the chart, in 2005, the landfill was the majority of
waste
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 disposal,with about 1800
million
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tonnes
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, higher than that of dumping at sea by three times.
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,
this
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 figure steeply declined to 600
million
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tonnes
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 in 2008.
Similarly
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. The number of
waste
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 dumping at sea remain unchanged until 2007,at exactly 600
million
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tonnes
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,and
then
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 its numbers fell slightly to just under 600
million
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tonnes
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 a year later.
On the contrary
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, while burning indicated the least amount of
waste
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 disposal in 2005, with around 500
million
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tonnes
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, the figure rose moderately to approximately 900
million
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tonnes
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 after three years,making it is the most popular way of
waste
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 disposal.

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