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the population of six various countries and all other countries of European Union between 1998 and 2007.

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The given pie charts illustrate the people of six various countries and all other countries of the European Union between 1998 and 2007. Overall, it is clear that there was a slight change in the people numbers of all states and all other European countries indicated the highest amount of people proportion throughout the period. Looking at the
first
 main feature, in 1998,all other European states indicated the highest amount of population, with about 29.4%,higher than that of Germany almost one time.the figure rose minimally to 29.7% in 2007.
On the contrary
, there was 17.5% in Germany’s citizen numbers,but its figure fell slightly to 16.6% nineteen years later.
On the other hand
, between 1998 and 2007,the UK and Italy experienced a mere increase in their citizen numbers,rising only 0.1% to 12.3% and 11.9% respectively.
Moreover
, while there was a 0.7% increase in the population amount of Spain, rising to 9% in 2007, France’s population rose by 0.3% to 12.8% in the same period.
However
, Portugal indicated a mere decline from 8% to 7.7% over the period.
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