Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree of disagree. What other measures do you think might be effective ?

Nowadays, some individuals opine that an effective solution

of

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decreasing

the

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traffic

growth and environmental consequences is to increase the cost of

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fuel. Personally, I totally agree with

this

statement and I will elaborate on

this

essay.

Firstly

, In the developed world, the amount of transport increased throughout the years, leading to the effect on the individuals, who utilised the road, especially car users.

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, most people

tended

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to waste a bunch of time

on

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traffic

jams in daily life.

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, Increasing the price of petrol

play

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a vital role in

a

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decline the

private

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transport users

due to

unaffordable

price

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gain

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a large number of consumers on public transport

such

as trains and buses.

For example

, the survey shows that Thai populations are prone to use public transportation more than usual in order to save money for other purposes.

Secondly

,

Transportations

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emitted

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a large number of CO2, which leads to global warming in the near future.

Additionally

, If many

transportations

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in the world provided CO2 emissions simultaneously, It would affect either human beings or creatures around the world.

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,

current

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people in

an

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urban

area

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are prone to face health problems from environmental issues, especially air pollution.

Moreover

, Polar bears experienced losing habitats

due to

CO2 emissions and primary global warming.

Consequently

, Stopping

traffic

growth can

also

prevent environmental effects. in conclusion,

Although

altering the cost of petrol affected some individuals in terms of living expenses and emotions,

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approach

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to a decrease in the number of

traffic

jams and negative environmental outcomes.