Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life, while others think that the money should be put into savings for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Its been a topic of debate whether
money
should be saved or spent. some individuals can not resist their selves to splurge money
, while others believe in the idea of saving every penny. In this
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I will be discussing both views and why in my opinion Correct your spelling
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believe that both approaches are wrong.
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To begin
with, Money
is a utility that in its best form is meant to be used to improve our lives. Spending it on things such
as the food that we eat, clothes that we wear , taking care of our dependent children , spouse and elderly parents all are good reasons to spend money
. However
, some people spend money
just for the sack of spending it buying unnecessary things such
as the latest iPhone edition . Although
buying materialistic stuff will give them a momentary pleasure , soon they will be in financial problems .There is no harm in enjoying life
by going on a holiday or buying the latest fashion trends but it should be within the one limit and capability.
On the other hand
, there are some people who enjoy saving money
to the point that they become stingy. these individuals deprive themselves of the little pleasure of life
such
as eating decent food or take a time off to go on a holiday. These people may have a huge bank account but fail to live life
to the fullest. Life
is short and no one will carry their saving with them in the other world.
In conclusion, the very purpose to earn money
is to lie a comfortable life
. which mean we need to learn to save and spend money
in the right amount.Submitted by ph.amal.just on
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