You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Two maps below display the centre of a small

town

called Islip, the upper one shows the present version of the

town

and the other one shows the plans for its development. In general, the

town

has been fully renovated. As we can see from the present map, there is no path connecting either the Northside or the Southside of the

town

.

Thus

, in order to improve the traffic, the city has

been

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planned to establish a dual carriageway in the shape of a circle to surround the whole

Islip

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city.

Moreover

, there are two rows of shops which the one close to the Northside of the city has been planned to replace as a shopping centre. The local government

also

planned to improve the public facilities near

around

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the area,

such

as

bus

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the bus

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stop and car park which are going to be situated

next

to the shopping centre. Across the shops, we can easily find out that they planned to re-organize the housing area.

Furthermore

, for safety considerations, a sidewalk

that is

designed for only pedestrians will be constructed between two rows of

the

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shops.