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In their advertising ,businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some ways. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

#businesses #emphasise #products #development
In
this
 modern era, advertising takes a big place in industries in every kingdom and somehow they used to make updated
products
.In my point of view,
That is
 really good and there are a plethora of advantages that we can
received
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.
Firstly
, Every company in the world like to increase their brand and sales. For that, they useing different
stratagies
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strategies
 for improving their business and the
people
 who brought their
products
.
For instance
 when we need to buy something and we go to the shop and we only buy the product, which is more
eye catching
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 because
people
 love pretty things. Every time they need
to
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something brand new updated
products
.And nowadays
people
 can choose what product I am going to buy and
that is
 a huge
benifit
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benefit
.
On the other hand
, there is a huge competition among the
companies
 because there are a
lot
 of
companies
 in the same field,
Also
 they trying to develop their business and
that is
 the reason why they move to try different updated
products
.
For example
, there are a
lot
 of tea
companies
and
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selling tea. which is the most difficult issue that they faced and
finally
, they make and move to make new
products
 for increasing their sales.
People
 can use a
lot
 of types of
products
 to develop their business. In conclusion, moving
companies
 to create new
products
 for their future
that is
 very important for both parties, Customers and Owners. And a
lot
 of
benifits
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benefits
 gather around with that. As far as I consider every product need a change.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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