Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, While others think it can be harmful for children . What are the advantages and disadvantages.

There are a lot of opinions towards the

children

that doing paid

work

. Some people agree with

this

, but some people

not

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.

Children

that

doing

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do

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it usually because of their economic

situation

that

push

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them for getting money to live. The

situation

will get worse if

this

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this child

these children

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children

did not do any

work

where they can get hungry and live in a slum area. Despite

of

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this

, they should have more

time

to

study

and play with their friends to build social

connection

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connections

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.

Children

that do

working

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work

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tend to have less

time

to

study

and play. They will have to try harder to

study

when they have leisure

time

after

work

.

This

will affect their academic achievement and how their brain works. For them, it is okay to

work

and have less

time

to

study

rather than not eating anything in a day. The

situation

would get worse in

a

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long run if they not

studying

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study

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well

in

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with

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their child. Their generation more likely would not be able to create

a

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apply

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new innovation and getting more tired when

do

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doing

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many activities due to bad physical quality for getting less workout or sports.

On the other hand

,

children

who have to

work

on

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at

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their age will be beneficial for their family to live. They are going to help

increasing

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increase

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their family

economy

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economic

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condition to a better

situation

. By

this

, the number of people who live under average income or

poor

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are poor

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will be decreased.

This

will affect the

gini

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ratio of a city or country

for

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in

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general.

Altough

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Although

this

seem

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good, the government should give better policies for the poor to have

better

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a better

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life so the

children

can focus on studying and playing with their friends. In conclusion,

children

who do

paid

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pay

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work

is not a good decision to create a better life for

a

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the

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long term. So, the government should lay their hands by creating good policies so their family can have access to get a better life and them can play and

study

happily.

This

will positively affect the economic condition of a country.