Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Despite the fact that the

computer

plays a crucial role in the

modern day

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and can be accessed conveniently by the majority of people.

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various drawbacks when

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children play

computer

games. In

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essay, I will provide the negative impacts of

this

issue and how to decline

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. Owning the fact that video game is the most popular activity in adolescent.

Although

this

hobby is used for relaxing, it has

influence

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on young people in various ways.

Firstly

, some kids have an

unsatisfied

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academic

result

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. Wherewith, they pay attention to play more than education.

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, some

student

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are addict

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to

play

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computer

game

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and do not

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review the lesson.

Therefore

, they will flunk a test.

Similarly

, health is one aspect of

this

statement. When they spend

time

with the

computer

for a long

time

, it can impact directly to their body.

Thus

, their fitness

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worse

such

as eyesight, stress, and so on. After I had indicated the source of the problem, I suggested multitudinous ways to diminish the harmful result.

Initially

, when they deserve

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a displeased grade, the parent should control their kid and restrict

time

to play

computer

.

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, some

family

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allocate

time

to free play

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weekend

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.

Also

, exercise is the most vital activity that should

instead

video game. If they decrease staying in front of monitor

time

for working out, they will obtain healthy condition. To illustrate, young citizens who attend

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sport

club

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have a lower chance to be sick than a gamer. In conclusion, though

computer

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the computer

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is the technology that become

to

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part of

everyone

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life, it has

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drawbacks, especially the children who prefer to play

computer

games.

Consequently

, they ought to focus on using duration and exercise.