You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university. Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course. In your letter, write: Why you are writing Which course it is and when you plan to study Why you want to study this course

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Dear Mr John, My name is Naomi Umami. I am writing

this

letter to ask for some information about the online Accounting Diploma course. I am currently studying at Kyoto University in Japan, majoring in undergraduate business administration and will be graduating in May 2024. I would like to expand my knowledge in international accounting so that I can edge out for future job hunting.

Therefore

, I am considering taking one of the courses that your university is offering as distance online learning, which is a 2-year Accounting diploma. If it is possible, I would like to start in September 2022 so that I will be able to finish in 2024. I would appreciate it if you could give me some information regarding my application; what document I need to apply for and by when. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Naomi Umami

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